We're,
just strangers....
kissing.
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Prompt: Four Little Words...
Four words only...
A contest entry
- Four Little Words... by Ithica.
825 points, ended May 9, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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realization
This one was (my) front runner... I had dreams of run-by smooches all night long. I think the world would be a much kissier place if we all laid a big wet one on all the people we wish we could have for just one innocent moment in time. And I appreciate train-riding much more than I ever really considered before now. Those wise, loving beasts with their overlapping boldnesses secretly making the world go 'round while we creatures of panic fumble our hearts like clumsy acrobats. Yes, this one did it (for me). -
four words with so many different view you could take on this.. In a way it could be sensual.. and another it could be sad? Well done!!
Angel
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With the impact of a locomotive... Hard to forget a kiss like that!! Thank-you for entering!!!
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awww, cute poem!!!
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Ohh.. now this could be taken a few ways.. I love it!
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Interesting twist. . .it always amazes me what people can do with these short poems
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Interesting and quirky! Neat four word prompt.
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