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what do you wish to live for?

what do you wish to live for?

is it because your instinct tells you to?
or is it the chemicals in your brain are "balanced" enough to not think of it?
do you live for the moment? till the moment of  death do we part.. Do you live to "rot"?

What do you live for
Dear curious creatures

Do you live for tomorrow or to hold yesterday's sorrow
Do you live to find what is not found? To have what is not had?
Do you live to fight to stand  to have control in the soil beneath you and the direction your feet take you?

to what do you live for?
To what turns you round and around

does this "reality" take you by the collar as you follow humbly by your own hand? Submission and willful enslavement the intangible  touchables

to what do you wish to live for?

for i live simply i live in emotion i live in and for love
to love and  to be loved  on my knees tied to this shaped container she or he a
beautiful enslavement: love
simplistic complexities  i live to give, to share, but to them my ones i keep me safe just for them and the love of me

from where i am,
here i stand
there and here. with and without  the multitude of possibilities.
The  nothing the everything there is no difference
No black no white

There is no you and me it is just we is me and me is we
we are us no I

but in this container I  will hold you  as a disconnected extension 
I feel you
Because I feel me
Because of we

And to what do you wish to live for?

What do you live for

I live just for the “be”  and act of “being”

Such content lies hidden deep beneath the sensitivities  of my fingernails
I am a bubble, what may you be?

The Infinite intransient  simultaneous transcendent 
I am a bubble


Author notes

In response to someone i once knew who talked the talk but with no real comprehension of what she herself said yet
also looking for an escape and to runaway with the curiosity of the other side

she said jokingly serious that she wished she could die

and i say theres no limit to self-disillusionment
as reality is relative

as she lived breathed and ate her own shit/excretions
to the point of addiction
this grieved me to know again and again
that I nor anyone else can save someone but we can help that person help themselves
but i continue on as she continued to throw me away

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  • albinoblacksheep720
    March 19

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    What a way of thinking...

    As I read this, my simplest of thought just combust from the comparison of this profound epiphany that we, being, always ignore. Reality is so complex yet so simple when the fantasy we create is fragile and simply unstable. This voice which speaks to me makes me want to cherish all the memories that made me, me. The warmth from this strike my soul and heart with a hearted hug. I'm glad I read this and I like this a lot. This was just what I need to remind myself I don't live in the fantasy. Well written. Keep writing, bubbles.


  • individuality gold member
    August 8, 2008

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    i agree with the person below this comment they have a sound heart and mind and should be given a medal for their efforts.


  • Dark Otter
    July 16, 2008
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    Wow!

    This one gave me a headache as this bubble burst in my brain. I wasn't expecting this. It's a little raw in some places but overall its a great piece that I will give a reread to. Your prose has great depth beyond your years and maybe, beyond mine. Thanks for the contemplation.

    • SoulfulBubbles
      July 16, 2008
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      thank you, if you ever feel like writing your contemplation or perception/take on this i would be more than eager to listen ^-^ (<--- loves philosophy)


  • Domz101
    June 9, 2008

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    I love the write, i won't say poetry,

    i'd call this a declaration, declaring your own curiosity, i think it may be that we all have unique and closed lives that we know only whom we allow ourselves to, maybe if we gave our STRANGE but unknown nieghbours a chance and just talked to them out of the blue we'd be happier...and they'd probably get scared 'cos you're talking to them, but what the hell.

    I really - no -truly believe in hipocricy, i believe there is not one single poerson on this earth that can live thier lives without having hipocritical views, there are borders and we all cross them, then we are punished for being hipocrites, kinda wierd when you think about it, the write obviously made me think - as you can tell, i really like it - eye opening, jaw dropping, eyebrow raising stuff...well done and btw i'll need my mop back...LOL!!!
    Nice one Bubbles, see ya, domz!


  • Ithica silver member
    May 21, 2008
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    We are ALL normal for individual purposes... We are as we should be in the grander scheme of things... Though not always pretty through the eyes of others.... We are livings lesson's to the people we meet as they are each to us... No differences... No potential for growth.. No growth...? Must repeat the same lessons...


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    May 21, 2008

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    This is great! Very well thought of and written. I love it how it really makes me think... What are we here for, how every single person is SO different.. what is "normal" or "abnormal" who is it that decides what it right thinking, or wrong thinking. Overall awesome write - just my style

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