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Truthful?

Golden truths
Concealable lies

A contest entry

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    May 10, 2008

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    Another masterful four words hun, you are great at this!

    Best of luck
    ♥
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    May 9, 2008
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    whoa...so much you can read into that

    little poem. Alas...remember kind poetess...more golden
    truths are found in each other...then all the concealable
    lies put together...sometimes, the soul doesn't want
    to see what lies before their very own eyes.
    Powerful 4 little words!
    ears/Seattle


  • Ithica silver member
    May 9, 2008
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    Sounds like someone's getting "fleeced" hehe! Thank-you for entering!!!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    May 8, 2008
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    Well Done,

    I Like This One As Well.
    Thanks For Sharing. Peace~

    -Timothy aka poeticweaver