At night,
your voice beckons me,
I answer your call.
Your light shines,
to calm my turbulent waters.
Within my restless existence,
your inner peace soothes me.
From within the night,
your melody plays upon my waves.
Time has bound us,
from the beginning.
Within the beauty of a storm,
our love making has been infinite.
As the untamed sea,
and moon become one.
Shine on my love,
silver moon.
Let your magic play upon the stars…
A contest entry
- Magic in the Silver Moon by Lone Defender.
500 points, ended May 19, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Excellent background...and a wonderful use of words. Thank you for entering.
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This is timeless romance. I like the soft feel of your words. They captivated me right away. I felt like I was wrapped in loving arms as I read your words. And the picture you used with your poem is amazing. It is gentle and still bold to make the right impact on the reader.
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that's an awesome poem!!!
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The timeless magic of a dream. How softly it rests. Then runs off to play in the heavens.
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very simple and very pretty
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Caught in the spell of your words,
I bow to you. This is magnificent!
Aesthete
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Stunning piece of witing here. Not been feeling myself lately, so this touched me very very deeply. Love it. It is deep,powerful and talks to me. Very moving.
Love
Wayne Leon
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moving very moving
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Oh my this is really sensual dear! Very good it crooned to me in a big way!!!!
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Excellent x2
Within my restless existence,
your inner peace soothes me.
From within the night,
your melody plays upon my waves.
As beautiful as words may be made in love
Stunning
Rick
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Sigh...I felt every word of this and kind of takes me to Trieste...but I think you knew it would Love, C
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