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Knocking On Heaven's Door

Darling look at us now...
On the verge of giving our hearts a crown...
I believe true love we have finally found.
Yes we can reach our dream...
Of being together for all eternity...
The path ahead is us together just you and me.
So come over and don't back away anymore...
Let's reach the next level of love for sure...
We are knocking on heaven's door.
Once it's open and we are let in...
We will combine our hearts and begin...
To have a love even better then what it has been.
Don't you think for one second in time...
That our love is not going to end up fine...
It will get better as the steps we climb.
Dear you thrill me to the core...
You always make me feel better then before...
Now here we are knocking on heaven's door.
We are about to take a journey...
One that will lead us to our destiny...
This we can't pass on so let's make it be.
We will became the greatest combination...
I'll be your very own map of direction...
As you will be my everlasting companion.
So come on and hear us dear lord...
Hear our hearts mighty roar...
We stand here knocking on heaven's door.

The door to happiness is in heaven.

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  • So Agreed

    This is wonderful and amazing like you. It speaks of true love and everlasting love. In the end all should have those two. Again my amazing writer.

    Always
    ~Amazing Angel~


    • Climax gold member
      May 28
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      Interesting concept, huh...

      Now the question here is... Should we knock?..

      *Kiss + Huggs*
  • wow...I loved the first few lines. You have a lot of talent as a poet and it comes shinning through in this piece of art you've penned!

    Mylee

    • Climax gold member
      May 18
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      I can live with that, thanks for the comment once again dear!
  • this is a geat write or wording is better and it will get better each time this is fantice have a great day keep up the great work

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