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Inner Embrace [Adult]

I feel you move silently

across the room and your

masculine scent awakens me,

stirs my senses to life

My skin prickles with desire

 

A gentle hand on my naked hip

is all it takes to start the flow

of moist need within me

I move gently beneath your touch,

body arching with intent

 

Sliding your length beside me,

your warmth along my curves,

a fire burns beneath my skin

Your soft breath upon my neck

sends shivers of anticipation

 

I feel your need for me grow

as I reach back to guide you

to a place of blissful pleasure

Our yearning meeting each other

in a warm inner embrace

 

Your lips trace my back,

and soft moans escape mine

I grow taunt with delight

as hands slide around to caress

smooth rounded skin

 

We move now as one

A slow rhythm of equal aching

Building upon sought sensuality

and each other's knowing touch

Needing to find sweet relief

 

Faster pace heightens

the forcefulness of our craving

Whispering your want in my ear,

excites our intensity

as we drown in this ecstasy

 

I let go of pent up passion

as you release your heat

within me

 

 

 

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  • Oh SiS, just wonderful, so full of sensuality..heat and passion..you painted it all out so beautifully, so easy for me to read heheh

    Love this

    Cin
  • Oh SiS, just wonderful, so full of sensuality..heat and passion..you painted it all out so beautifully, so easy for me to read heheh

    Love this

    Cin
  • chiefmac
    May 20

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    The heat is felt as passion grows in tempto to natures needs. This is clear love driven to find sweet relief in blissful caresses with shared emotions, raw, primative, yet, moving to become quenched in tingling pulses.

  • Haha sorry your name caught my eye. Then the tittle of this one caught my eye. I wasnt sure what to expect but It intrigued me. So.. I read on. I must say this piece is well done. The lines are dripping with passion. It also has an extreme sense of taste about it. Its classy yet deeply fullfilling as a read. This piece is almost like their is a white curtain and you can see the shadow cast upon it from the other side. You can get all the imagery but none of the details. I think the way youve done this makes it very much a work of art really. Thanks for sharing and I like the way you write. I love rhymeing poetry but you have an exception here for me. Well done ~peace

    • hehe.. thank you kindly! I'm glad you enjoyed this!


      I do a mix of free verse and rhyme.. all good fun!
      I shall be by to read you soon

  • Weltt gold member
    May 17

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    Wow!!

    A hot, steamy, and sensual piece here, but done very tastefully and rich with emotion. Lots of imagery throughout. The fifth stanza was my favorite as well as the ending. Well done!!!

  • Outstanding!!

    A very passionate write with all the desire one could want in this moment of loves rewards. Written tastefully with plenty of imagery and much emotion. Wonderful job on this poem. Don

  • JWGoethe
    May 14

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    Is it getting warm in here? Another hot and sensual write. Outstanding. I swear, you may be the most prolific writer on this site. Keep the fire burning.
  • Wooo! lol  This is yummy. I love sensual.erotic pieces that show, not tell. You've pulled it off wonderfully, tastefully and lovingly. Brava!*Rose*


    Ashley


  • solo wisp gold member
    May 13

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    Love the title ...

    and the article is most spectacular as well.

    Lotsa pictures and stuff, yep.

    Truly I love the 1st stanza the best ... a physical awakening. heh



    Steve

  • Oh was this ever so sensually beautiful. The emotion in this is so very well expressed, and it all came together perfectly! Great write!

    ~Bella

  • crimsondew silver member
    May 13

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    *sigh* now I want my hubby here...

    very well written dear...good flow and beautifully sensual!

  • oh WOW!!
    I had to read this out loud




    un.


  • runewalker
    May 12

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    good gravy goddesses! what are you doing to us? Common, we are mere mortals..... that's just not fair....

  • Slow building intensity that builds to a fire. Excellent!


  • jul
    May 11
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    that's hot, yet very tasteful! good job
  • WOW !
    Mmmm this is sensually hot as hell
    Yet beautiful and the feelings of wanton needs flow within your words.
    Nicely penned
    Julie
  • Bob Fox
    May 9
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    well

    I guess you know you make men hungry

  • A very beautiful and sensual piece you have penned here... lovely imagery of desire and passion!!
    Outstanding!! Whew~~
    Linda

  • Oh yes. You been reading my mind lately. Extreme heat, perfectly penned.

  • Exceptionally sensual, if that doesn't stir your blood then your already six feet under and stone cold...Tastefully composed...great poem


  • KayJay46 gold member
    May 9

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    I'm so glad you took a break from the quickies... Your longies are so much more satisfying (LOL). To heck with a cold shower... I'm just going to memorize this and recite it to myself as I fall asleep... "perchance to dream..." Wonderfully erotic and sensual... Thank you for sharing this lovely vision...
    Ken

  • holy..... i think i gotta hav ten cold showers now....im...im.....errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr speachless??? goly....my innocence....its been ruined *cough*



    • Aww *puts hands over your eyes* lol
      Wanted to do something not for a contest and what do ya know.. that came out
      • hahaha yea like thats gonna help you know im already tainted

        wow big suprise there.... hahaha this write was so not like you.... Pahahahaha YEA RIGHT!
  • WOW hun! Very hott! The images are so steamy! Fantastic write!! I'll have to re-read this later tonight, when my man gets home


  • moluv10 gold member
    May 9

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    Hott!! This definately gets the temperature rising! I really enjoyed reading this. Keep on writing.


  • buffsab99 silver member
    May 9

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    Wow

    Amazing, not the thing I should read when I first wake up but now I am wide awake . Incredible!!!!

  • Wow........

  • Holly crap..I think I am going to wake Matt up right now

    Damn girl love it, sensual, beautiful and skillfully written


  • poppa silver member
    May 9

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    Wonderful crescendo of desire, passion and lust...whew *fans face*

  • I can say very little about this because my mind is elsewhere, unfortunately it is just my mind

    Wonderful write, just right for the reader to build their own picture, as I did.

    Thanks for the pleasure...Sue


  • pappacass
    May 9
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    holy teledo

    i'm in heat now....ddddddamn...i liked this alot...very erotic...mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm


  • azlyn gold member
    May 8
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    Oh Yeah!!! Hot Sis...very HOT!!!

  • More politics from the sociologist. Ha ha ha. Like I need to say what I think of this. Three bunnies.

  • HOT! I was getting ready to go to bed and this was going to be my last read, there will be no sleep now! Wonderfully passionate, love the build of intensity.

    I need to go find a poem of a cold shower now...lol

  • WOW!!!

    Very sensual. Very......vivid. I really like this one. awesome job.

  • Molten hot, Jacks... absolutely molten hot. Now, if you'd excuse me, I think I need to go take a cold shower.
    Very impressive and well done!


  • Leila
    May 8

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    Oh check you and your porno writes out haha i love it, just gonna go hav sex now back later. Lol. Jokes. Although well want the boyf here now I think ill send it to him. hehe. Amazing write =]. xx


  • Cerulean gold member
    May 8
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    Very much the hot stuff.

    I enjoyed reading this.

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