Missus kisses
Bliss is
In a list
A contest entry
- Four words by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended May 9, 2008, 23 entries
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Comments
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glad the title didn't keep as a stranger
this has the contentment of your category
it is a soft security to leave a [father' and ] mother's home for someone continuous as own family flow. my husband often thinks over how a thousand times with commitment to see beauty and heart as help is better than trying out once many. It's not just about give me a hip I want to dance. this has a touch of trust in lulls to stay by side and build. there's reinforcement for feelings, not disruptive but for switching to deepening satisfaction. anxiety of should is half as when not through {rotated} foster care...
fantastic choice of emphasis,
babies are my subject -
Sincerely clever... x


