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Forgive Me

Please forgive me,
For going so far away...
So torn in half, part of me wants to go,
But part of me wants to stay.

I hate myself so much,
For leaving you behind...
Day-to-day sorrows
Constantly plagueing my mind.

Please forgive me,
For splitting your heart into...
And believe me when I say,
I truly love you.

I only hope you'll say,
"I forgive you for going so far away."
Then hold onto me tight and never let me go...
As the world dissolves around us and until time begins to slow.

Please tell me what you think

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  • TheDeadMan
    May 12, 2008
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    woops didnt mean ta copy your back ground. posted it then came and read yours. oh well doesnt matter. nice write i guess.


  • Desdemona42
    May 8, 2008
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    "I forgive you for going so far away."