A heart strides gracefully
Author notes
Contest: 4 words on any subject
A contest entry
- Four words by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended May 9, 2008, 23 entries
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Comments
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Brilliant four words!! I felt this! A heart can still stride gracefully despite restrictions


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it can be taken strongly for many
I felt the tug for the chapter to roll unstuck by interest generated
this is delicately containing the difficulty that has some release, by someone helping us to be better than behind as if known only by handicap. that title targeted a situation very well, for how we do or could easily yield to aid, by sincere admission maybe on both parts. It reminds me of how there's thought that sickness is without interference and we may clear routes for cheer but amazingly all to be unstopped is still for hope of another involved love.
really expanding sufficiency,
babies are my subject
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just lovely... x



