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I don`t love you
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Author notes
We seldom say the words directly
and they may be cloaked in other ornate verbiage and reasoning
The loss and outcome is the same
Each man and woman is compelled to be the conductor of their own heart
A contest entry
- Four words by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended May 9, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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such meaning!
this is truly, amazing. and i totaly agree that they are the most four powerfull words. i have had it said to me many times, however out of cowardess or kindness i shall never know, the words have been kinder..
this is a very sad read, however, it made me think. Well done
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Hi pinklogic
Simple words, with perfound impact
When the pic was taken, I was only worried
At the time I wrote this, I was totally lost and depressed
Now I am very happy and feeling loved
Time is a great healer
Your comment is thoughtfull, Rick
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Such hard words to hear from someone... We do usually cloaked those words don't we? Yet their meaning is still felt!
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Sad to read Rick. You are right, we can be our own condcutor of our hearts. I chose to conduct with dignity.
sorry to read this. I wish I had not read it. I feel some pain not necessarily my own.
Even the stationary burns.
Words can hurt so much.
I wont take it persnoal but it is a sad read.
Steffany
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hi rick. I just came back to this, really to see your pic and it is a differant pic, that honestly makes me sad.
After reading the comments, I am saddened more, I assume you didn't mean this as taken, or for anyone to take personally, but simply as 4 words with high impact.
Reguardless, it is all sad.
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Hi Michelle
The words came to me at once
so I wrote them
They are in my mind
I removed the other picture by request
I thought my notes were fair enough in this
They are four powerful words
but you won... lol
Rick
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You deleted my comment?
Which part did you not like that the look in your eyes was when you were with me...
or that i take this personal and ouch is right is right!
Or the part that you never did love me?
Like a poem another person wrote about you once and you took it personally and said you hated it!
Remember how you felt at that very moment.
Be loving to your friend at least on the board.
I wrote one poem of brokeness and then i dropped it, because i wont hurt you like that!
You may delete again if you want
Funny i didnt ever say this to you...
So as a poet you are pretty right they are the four most powerful words and you should win Gold! -
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Lisa
Sorry this ofended you
I will let your comment stand as is
I am hert from you
not angry
Rick
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OUCH!!!
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Hi Sue
I`m doing fine
Thanks for the Smilies
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'ssssss Rickie!
I am so tired.....what a day! Who knew flowers could be so exhausting!!!
Talk to ya later Rickie...smile for me!
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four words we won't forget... x
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I see pain in those eyes reflecting your hearts deepest emotions: Love where are you! your look is soulfully seeking why? This is what I got from your four words...well done as always....novy
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Novy
The picture you seen was when he was with me on a mountain and you see hurt? That was one of our most beautiful moments.
hmmmmm thats sad.
Novy maybe you seen something i didnt at the time...
Rick please dont delete this, i found Novys insight to be maybe something i did not see.
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Hi Novy
I changed the picture
Thank you for always reading me
I appreate your thoughts
Rick
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Yes my friend,
they are very powerful words.
But what is even more powerful is,
" I do love you ".
[ now think about that ]
Your picture is truly very nice, you have the
most soulful eyes I have ever seem,
but Mr. you know what picture of you is my
favorite, it always will be. [ smile ]
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Love Ya,
Joyce
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Hi Joyce
Agree with you
I should have written that
The rest of you message
makes me blush
Real men do blush too
Thank you Hon
Rick
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well kiss my @$$! LMAO!
much said in the few powerful words. You are right, we often skirt around these words, in kindness, or perhaps being cowardly.
love,
Michelle
goes well with the pic
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Hi Michelle
I think most often in kindness
Like you opening words
Yes, the picture works for me
Thank you for the three pritty bunnies
PS: Last of the meatloaf going down... lol... Thank You
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I know where you can get more meatloaf...
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CooL
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