To have what we want,
To never give and flaunt.
To make the world stop,
And have you on top.
To exact revenge those who challenge you,
Then flaunt rage and hatred against the coup.
Here I stand, in this bitter world,
Holding my weight and my word.
If death do take me,
Then wish upon thee,
That the world does not crash,
And turn your life to trash.
All we want is bliss,
and to feel a caress.
To have a heaven,
Were it so easy...
A contest entry
- Make me cry =] [p/w allowed] by LeilaJayne.
500 points, ended May 10, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - (= Prewrites!!!!! ENTER NOW!!!!!!!!! =) by xCandieKissesx.
525 points, ended May 19, 2008, 79 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Thoughts?
Comments
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Nice write. Imagery and flow were good. I liked it. Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!
+ Jackie -
Nice write, i liked it. Thanks for entering! x
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Interesting write. well put together. Keep up the good writing.
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