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I Died For You, You Didn't Care

You did nothing for me
Left me to die
Burned my heart
Among beds of roses
Adorned with thorns
Upon a fiery grave

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    May 10, 2008

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    Wow. What a take on the picture hun, you have just blown this away!

    Best of luck

    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • tarcus
    May 9, 2008
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    Nice take on the pic.

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    May 8, 2008
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    Nice take

    Fiery grave.. nice end.


  • crimsondew
    May 8, 2008
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    Well on the prompt dear...All the best!

  • A nice take on the chosen prompt. Sad and expressive. Thank you for your entry!

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