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Four Beauties of May

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

...Four Beauties of May...

 

 

Orange…

mingles the oomph of red, and thrills of yellow,

in paper posies picked on AP's poetry range.

Soft fragrant rains decant as tangy tangerine jello,

as May Queens pirouette on their fine tuned emotions,

when birthday celebrations skip across oceans.

 

Green…

kissed with blue are the gems of spring,

mother of all goddesses and an emerald Queen,

poetic charms spill from these words that sing.

Clowns to poets ~daydream in magical potions,

when birthday celebrations skip across oceans.

 

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Author notes

Background designed by -LilacThOughts-

My poem is based on the four birthday girl's talents as poets...an Emerald, which is the birthstone of May...and the orange colour of my background, which I made for it's warmth, vibrance, excitement and energy.

Many Happy Returns to JeannieD, troyias and LostInProgress, may all your dreams come true...

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    October 12, 2008

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    Bravo!

    You are so talented! What a delightful background. Love the content of your poem, the flow & rhyme are perfection! Well done & of Gold!


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    June 1, 2008
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    Congratulations on the gold trophy, Lilac!


  • GraphicOholics
    May 31, 2008
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    Oh my my my, awesome poem and bkgrd


  • BarefootSoul
    May 19, 2008

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    extraordinary! Wonderful job!! You really took time with this it shows

  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    May 18, 2008

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    Extraordinary poem to match your background. Yes, in allpoetry, birthday celebrations do skip across oceans!

    On OOmph you used zeroes instead of O's "00mph". I read it as zero miles per hour!

    Love ya Sis!

    • -LilacThOughts-
      May 18, 2008
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      Trust you sis to pick up on oomph! lol I purposely used the noughts instead of o's to exgaggerate it, and never thought about miles per hour lol but you are right it did look like that, so I've changed it back to the o's ahh! well hehe

      Love you too sis


  • StarEyes
    May 10, 2008

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    What a beautiful birthday background!!! And I just had to look today yes, it is my birthday today.... ugh. hehe. Great job on this one!!

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Nyetta

  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    May 9, 2008
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    What a fun Birthday background! I love the shimmering bright colors in the background and the clown ready to romance or May ladies!

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