I found this place
in ancient wood
an old train station
with mossy hood
once bustling with activity
it's beauty holds me in captivity
from sea of green
to old tracks ashore
I'm prisoner to
mother earth's decor
shackled by love but never scarred
here forever my skeleton stands guard
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A contest entry
- Pif Picture Prompt. Quickish. by Perception.
450 points, ended May 9, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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hahaha congrats on the Gold and on another beautiful penning lol and good night, must shut it down hahahaha beauty sleep, you know hahaha
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awwww wow, i really liek this alot
its so beautiful
great job and keep it up
stephanie
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Oh. Very nicely done... I really love the rhyming...Very good descriptions also.
Wonderful
Thanks for entering and good luck
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Wow I adore this! Your descriptions are wonderful ... a beautiful tale you have penned for this pic!
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This has amazing imagery and metaphor playing throughout...love it...All the best!
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