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Dancing With Moons Glow

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Planning romantic night

under pretty rays of the moon

dancing arm in arm with

someone I love dearly...

      ~~

Maple tree limbs wave

shadows of moon glows

its beauty~place of contentment

arms that share my love.

       ~~~

Gracefully my steps follow his feet

knowing I am a bit clumsy,

smiling as he whispers, your doing

great my love~giggling as I thanked him

as my grace was not perfect...

  ~~~~~

Sipping our wine, snacking on cheese

and crackers, content in our own

little world of bliss, with in this

full moon, love is blissful~ but

so his friendship~I treasure....

     ~~~~~

Dancing under the perfect moon..

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  • Puppydog silver member
    May 27

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    AHHHH......! PERFECT!!

    What a perfect evening, two in love sitting out in nature's beauty cherishing each other and the moon above.

  • Amazing

    I like the way your writing style is. I find it similar to my own. Please come read, comment and criticize my poems. Constructive criticism always helps. Thanks! MidnightDreams
  • Excellent

    Love the pic, content and flow.
    Thanks for sharing, pen on!

    -Timothy


  • aboomer
    May 9

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    Lovely, lovely! And great picture!
    Your wording goes so perfectly with your pic. I love the feel of this write - full of lightness, love, romance - and wine and crackers!
    Great ending!!!