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Memories Forever

With a smile
With a wink
They stare back at me

Their memories
Fill my memories
They fill me with warmth

The laughs
The tears
They have all been written down

And one day
We will see each other again
Pictures and me hand in hand

We both will fade with age
But we share the same memories
Pictures will tell me the same story

Time and Time again…

Author notes

tell me which one is better please this one or The Heart of Homes because i need to choose one for a school assignment and i cant chose

answer the question at bottom of writting.

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  • Angelflower
    July 20, 2008

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    I really enjoyed this..I liked the emotion here.. though I must admit, the imagery was a litle hard to see but after reading it trhough again I could make it out you did a good job..


    Angel


  • Minos
    May 9, 2008
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    eh, this one is alright. no doubt it'll be fine with the people at school.