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Garden Of Lies

Time plays on mental escapes,
growing weary with the escapades
of simple distractions

Mental capacity shapes forms
in the mind and creates delusions,
sprouting fears and lies

Life spins on a circle and fades,
lifting pieces of sanity and slicing
chunks into sprinkled dust

Love's formations dive through
and chase familiar surroundings
further within the threshold

Suddenly, time is not so important,
and feelings collide with logic
clashing and turning chaotic

Life isn't as simple as answers
to questions that are asked continuously,
living in guilt and regret for the past

Confidence turns into nothingness,
and everything is pulled back into
a small corner of one's self

Lies and truth bicker and battle,
and suddenly, motivation is lost
Right and wrong intermingle

Wants and needs blind selfish eyes
and miserable conclusions occur
to drag into the ground once more

Suffering never seems to cease
while the mind wanders freely
without a leash and collar

Beliefs sprout in the garden of lies

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  • I liked the whole thing, but I have to say that I have a favorite Stanza. It's the third one:

    Life spins on a circle and fades,
    lifting pieces of sanity and slicing
    chunks into sprinkled dust

    It has a feeling of a harsh caress. It deffinetly paints an image that I like to play over in my mind.
    This is a great piece that really says something with a message that forces you to think about it. Great job

  • Childsight
    May 11

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    nice write. I like the wording. you truly paint the picture of how lies can eventually strangle a perso and their beliefs