The woods have changed
The shelter is still there
Wound in carolina jasmine
A simple wiki-up lesson for sons
That failed to hold out
The dark night's rain
I hope they are better
Prepared...
A contest entry
- PIF - three of my favorite things by tara wilson.
1200 points, ended May 22, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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A very different & interesting take on the prompts...thanks so much for entering my contest..
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Fine telling - the reminiscing together with the concern for them now, wound in carolina jasmine holding it nicely together... after all these years.
Marlene
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