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Sapphire Skies.

Across the sapphire sky

we fly--we fly

Under the moon we face our fates,

lets dance until we die.


Pretty girls with singing voices

and lovely boys who know a tune or two

Come on, lets love and sing together

on the ship-- the sails will guide us through.


You my little love, we'll rule

Diamonds can't shine as bright as stars

Kiss me and we'll dream forever--

in the sea and in our hearts.

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  • adsaige
    May 30, 2008

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    very nice write. it is a soft write that is definitely for remembering those sunday nights. beautiful.


  • creationsfromheart
    May 8, 2008
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    a very niuce write and the flow and rhyme are nicely done good luck in the contest.