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It isn't perfect!

Sometimes when I think I dont belong,
I always write a song.

People shed their feelings of hate,
which is the truth of fate.

Why do people act like this?
Everyone that I loved that disappeared are now amiss.

Life is an emotional roller coaster,
you think it gets better, then your emotions crash and everything gets worse!

Once you think life is perfect,
you soon realize it was a moment of protectment.

No one can help you,
and it effects other people too!

You soon lose friends,
and your life ends.

You are left alone with nothing and no one.
It hurts so much and you miss everyone you love a ton.

So what do you do?
Nothing, and you realize the mistake you made,
trust me I did it too.


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