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My bloody Valentine

As I sink into my hole so dead
A single white rose dipped in my blood so red
My heart was drained for this gift to give
It is my purpose why I live
In this box my love I entwine
A single white rose dipped in blood for you
My bloody Valentine

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  • Midgetbridgey
    May 28
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    I will comment after the contest finishes
    Best of Luck

  • Chrysalis
    May 9

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    I believe it was good though it needed a little more elaboration... it was fine anways, I too want to write of the same topic but it really never comes out right.

    You've done good so far.
    have a nice day.
    -Chrysalis