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Escape To Be Bound (Part V)

I awake in my bed in the quiet of night
Dead in the depths of redoubtable plight
The tears are like torrents, brewed for the blight
Leave me broken and bitter, and ever contrite

My beloved, my sweet, my beau of great bravery
To whom I am chained in the sweetest of slavery
I remember his kiss, my lips still taste in savory

How long has it been since your hands have caressed
The dip in my back and the curve of my breast
Since the heat of your touch held my heart in arrest
Or the tip of your fingers had my garden possessed

In agony waiting, for the sheets to be filled
With the grace of your scent, overflowing and spilled
And my arms to be wrapped round the broad of your build

O that I could fall into sweet somber ideal
I have fashioned and formed that the night looks to steal
Inflamed by a love beyond attempts to conceal
Where my prince does wait, in fulfillment, so real




Author notes

The Lady of the story has been aroused to the thought of her Beloved coming home.

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  • Faithhopelove
    September 2
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    Good luck


  • a dozenglassroses
    September 2
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    umm yeah you did not read my rules. I will give you a chance but it is ab absolute must to read the rules of my contest.
  • Product
    September 2
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    iMPeCCaBLe

    very nice imagery. great craft and choice of vocabulary. impressive no doubt. keep writing. PeAcE


  • Love My US Marine
    August 19
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    Very well written. I was not expecting a rhyme scheme. great work. thanks for entering.

  • perfectsunset
    August 14

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    Wow; I LOVED THIS. Your words left me breathless.
    You wrote so sensual, with passion & your rhyme was perfect. Your descriptions were exceptional, & the imagery you portrayed was just gorgeous.

    Thank you for entering & best of luck

  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    July 16

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    Thank you for your entry in our contest. This was a very interesting read but we were however not sure about the form, but nevertheless a very romantic poem.
    Please join us in future contests...Sue and Jeff


  • Lost Vampyre Angel Greeters member
    July 3

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    wow this is amazing, such powerful images your words paint,
    and the woman is just holding on to a lost dream,
    that shes holding so tight to as if its real,
    and oh my do i just relate to this, it touched home so much,
    sweet sensual write here,
    all my love, keep penning,
    best of luck in the contest,
    kitty xxx

  • R S Adams Jr silver member
    June 29

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    a lot of emotion..

    ...this poem has a lot of feeling in it. I can feel the passion and the love. I like it and I like the way it moves rhythmically through the verses.


  • Blooming Poet Greeters member
    June 26

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    okay. hmmm, may I say first of all the rhyme you choose is very hard to do well, second of all you seem to have no problem with it
  • gothishemocuts
    June 24

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    wow taht was great i really loved it it has alot of feeling and the rhyming was pretty much perfect... wow ... i just hope one day ill be as good as you ....you should check out my poems some time and tell me what you think

    . Rewarded 4

  • jssweetthing
    June 24
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    to arouse with words.. was well written... beautiful..

  • whos my humblepie
    June 23

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    I have been aroused to the thought of getting my man for a snack.

    I thought this was lovely, well done, and yummy!
    Please keep writing such beautiful pieces.
    *clappy.
    robyn

    . Rewarded 4


  • NurseyPoo
    June 23

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    Very Well Done

    I felt her anticipation and need. You have a write that flows well and has great word choices. Pen on...

    . Rewarded 4


  • Wanabat
    May 23

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    very moving

    I like the style and flow. and the way your words jump off the page and touch my mind and as they work deep into my heart.

    . Rewarded 4


  • PorcelainEyes
    May 11

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    Wow. How powerfully written without becoming trashy! That is such a delicate balance, especially with this subject... But very well done!

    . Rewarded 4


  • james119
    May 11

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    a very sensual poem done in good taste...
    I like the style and flow , the rhyme and choice of words. Good Write!!!

    . Rewarded 4


  • Leila Greeters member
    May 10

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    Just a quick comment to say thanks for entering this into my contest, sorry you didnt win but obviously there can only be three trophies given, which is a shame cause in this contest there deserved to be alot more winners! xxx

  • TracieLovesCherries
    May 10

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    as i read this poem, i felt as if i was the woman. you did a great job on the perspective. as if you have already experienced the want before. this poem is amazing!

  • Sandygram silver member
    May 10

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    Your words are so beautiful and so full of emotiomns. The reader can feel the longing in your words. Makes me miss my love not here with me. A wonderful Poem. Great idea to make a series.

    Take care,
    Sandy


  • whits end silver member
    May 9

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    I really think it's cool adding her feelings in the wait of all this. Her longing seems so strong and when you reunite with each other it will be majestic!!
    BRAVO!!!!!!!!!


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    May 8

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    This was really great.. thank you so much for telling me about it.. I love this "series" that you have going on with this..You have written so wonderfully and your imagery here is just great.. I really loved this.. great write hun and best of luck..

    Angel
    • deepheart
      May 8
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      Well, it is definitely a blessing to me when you have read what I have written. Thank you.

  • Shadowsong gold member
    May 8

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    happy now? I read it. It's good, I like that you changed the viewpoint and we now see things from the lady's point of view. As usual, the language is exquisite...I'm kinda jealous that you can write so dang poetically and mine are so simple.

    • deepheart
      May 8
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      Escape To Be Bound (Part III) was written from the Lady's viewpoint.
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