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Hardened Shred

Light dimly shadowed
As she stands in the back
Lost in the woodwork
Feeling all she does lack

No need to just see her
For pain she does bear
Don't try to get close
Don't bother to care

She's put on an armor
All hardened yet shred
Cracks are appearing
Life back comes ahead

Risk beyond darkness
Healing at hand
Chipping away
Seeking to stand

The wood is now splintered
And rotting away
She looks to the light
Of a bright new-filled day

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  • SingPraiz4Hym
    May 8, 2008
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    Thanks much for the kind encouragement and the 2nd place. God bless.


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    May 8, 2008

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    great write here poet... i really know this all to well you did wonderful... thank you for sharing this and entering this contest... good luck to you...