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No one Shall

No one shall rid me of,

my freedom,

my thoughts,

my hopes,

my dreams,

my love,

my life,

and my well being.

But only one person,

 

can rid me of sadness. 

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  • Summer Dawn
    July 25, 2008
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    good form on this poem