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Tranquility

currents
of peacefulness
flowing beside spring brook,
ripples around pebbled problems
sink into depths, as heart forgets the world,
daydreams drift with his mirrored face,
peering for an answer
in life’s swirling
currents

changes
along soul’s search,
sediments churn again
as thaws winter’s hold on nature,
grasp of frigid fantasies fade away
beneath warmth of season’s sunrise,
frozen rivers dissolve
as new hope brings
changes

content
with nature’s kiss
on meadow’s remembrance,
wildflowers touching heaven’s sigh
beneath shape shifting clouds that blossom forth,
cardinal’s chorus greeting dawn
of new mortal daybreak,
embrace his life,
content

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  • blondone
    May 21, 2008

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    This is beauitful I love this form I will have to try this one reads with ease and grand imagery a wonderful take on the prompt thank you for entering


  • blondone
    May 9, 2008
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    Wonderful form choice your prompt will be: Tranquility

    take this where you wish