Oh mommy,
the sweetest mommy
in the world.
You make the best cake
and spagetti too!
You're kind and caring
considerate and awesome!
You never yell at me
and never hate.
Mommy you smell
like lilacs
and all things good.
You're the best ever and
will never go away!
I know you'll always love me
no matter what!
Author notes
HAPPY MOTHER DAYS MOMMY!
In a list
A contest entry
- Ages 12 and under: ME AND MY MOM! by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended May 11, 2008, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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THIS IS AWESOME!(when i read the sentence 'mommy you smell' i'm like "what the...?That is so not Celeste!then i read on and then i got!!!
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This is very sweet! I hope both you and your mom have a happy mothers day!
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I like your poem Have a nice day
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excellent
Very nice. Your mom is very lucky to have been blessed by having you in her life. I hope you throw a decent Mother's Day for her. Thanks for entering my contest.
Good luck.
Brian
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