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night divine


Shades of darkness overlay,

changing the morning sun into a darker display.
As the moon hangs over, it owns the night.
Silence from species and forestry,
leaving life at peace.


Nothing stirring up the moment.
Just staring at a canvas,
displayed on high, blanketing the heavens,

 

O' night divine.

 

 

Author notes

Night time

Option - 1) Autumn (or nature in general)

AP Name: lowercase prelude

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  • arnica karuna
    June 14

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    :) Less is more

    Your write employs excellent imagery and concept. This is definitely intelligently crafted so I love it all the more.
    Congratulations, you're a finalist!!!

    Thanks for entering my contest and god luck!


  • Rhythm Child
    November 19, 2008

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    A great entry
    thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent so take care

    message me for anything
    Billy (Rhythm Child)


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 18, 2008

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    "blanketing the heavens" - beatiful piece..


  • Behemoth-King
    November 18, 2008

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    Very nice poem, beautifully express its underlaying theme and has some nice use of metaphor and embedded imagery, a little brief but still a very nice piece

  • Silver Sionnach
    November 6, 2008

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    Ah, I adore the night. And I can see from your words that I am not alone. You illustrate a beautiful night with words selected carefully and with attention to their meaning.

    Thank you for entering and best of luck.

    ~ L


  • movedon
    July 26, 2008
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    Dark....kind of. But I liked it. Well done.

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • DawnKestrel
    May 19, 2008

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    Nice!
    Good luck in my contest!

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