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Life's Bitter Lesson

I listen to the sweet melody's sound
telling me to be strong all around

Not easy forgiving those who have done you wrong
espically when you knew all along

This brittle heart of mine
so fragile, possesing not one inch of hate,

Has gone back to the corners of depression,
to fulfil its pre-ordained fate

so used, emotionally abused
sorrow is forever my life partner
no matter how hard I refuse

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  • Puppydog gold member
    May 8, 2008

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    HEARTWRENCHING!!!!!!

    There does seem to always be outside influences to hurt ones heart. Even the strong at times fall victim to that. One must then reach deep within their own heart and soul and find that which will help them through. You have that strength if you look deep enough.