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My Love

I was lost and afraid
In a world I did not know.
My friends weren't always there
I felt like no one did care.

I was stuck in the dark
Felt so lost and afraid.
Would anyone save me?
How could anyone see?

Then you came into my life
Like, a candle in the dark.
And you swept me away
To, show me a brighter day.

There was doubt in my heart
For I thought I could not love you.
But you guided me through
To a place that was true.

You understood how hard it was
How hard it was to give you my heart.
But as hard as I tried, I could not hide
You said that you loved me, but you lied.

We became friends without warning
I began to trust you more and more.
The longer we were together
The more I wanted to last forever.

But our relationship soon grew
And we began to love once more.
I gladly gave you my love and heart
But you just shot them down with a dart.

My love is strong
My love's forever.
My love is true
My love's for you.

A contest entry

Do you have someone you love that doesn't even know you exist?

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  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    June 2, 2008

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    this is very very good, at first it seems alittle bit of more forced rhyme, but then it picks up, i like this poem, not your best but still pretty good,
    keep penning,
    all my love, your friend,
    kitty xxx


  • XxUnforgiven-EmoxX
    May 14, 2008
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    ...

    Yes... She doesnt know me at all as much as ive tried...


    • VampireAlexia
      December 3, 2008
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      i'm sorry and i hope she'll open her eyes and see you before you're gone from her life completely. thanks for the give back!
      love ya,
      Alexia


  • lovexinxcoldxblood
    May 10, 2008
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    I really like your style.


  • Chocoholic156
    May 8, 2008

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    First off, you need your name and the option number in the author notes. I took off the option of love yesterday, which means that this is invalid. But, you just wrote it for this contest. And I appreciate it a lot, so I will keep it in the contest.
    I love how this poem is not like all of the others, you are not in love with someone who doesn't know, you are not in love with someone who loves you back, you are in love with someone who doesn't love you. I like it a lot.
    My favorite part was the first two stanzas, because it rings true for so many people and you worded it very nicely.
    Thank you for entering in my contest. and Good luck!

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