Lonely but not alone.
Sad but happy on the outside.
Phoney mask, blind to the real me.
Everyone is deaf to my pleas.
I stand among the forgotten,
Will I be remembered when I am gone?
Look deep down into the windows
of my soul, tell me what they reflect.
Is all hope lost? Can my happiness be found?
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Emotionally strong these words are.
Thank you. I enjoyed it.
Riftkin
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Strong emotions on this one my dear. We see you. We know you and we love you. That should be the retort to this heart felt piece of poetry. Keep writing my friend!!
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powerful write
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"Is all hope lost? Can my happiness by found?"
Shouldn't it be "...be found" instead of "...by found"?
Other than that, this is a wonderfully dark piece, with all the mysterious and sad thoughts human kind has to deal with through life. Good job! -
Thank you for sharing this very emotional write with others in our group. I know you are strong, and I know you will find your rightful path...Just don't be as passive as I am...
Momma
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this is my favorite by you sis 
I just wanna hug your thoughts right now because I can relate in this so many ways. Lovely pic and imagery in words.
Thanks for sharing and keep pennin in beauty
KaPricia
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Thanks Sis
Thanks Sis, I was feeling a little depressed when I wrote this one, after I posted it I read your poem When I.... met me, I it was like I was reading from my own thoughts, I put myself in place of you and all the answers I was looking for came to me, I am Me, and that is that, do not try to change me or mold me into something that you want, this is what you get and that is that. God brought you into my life for a reason, maybe neither one of us knows why just yet but are paths crossed maybe we here just to have someone to talk to, I do not know but He has a plan. Thansk again Sis,
raingoddess
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Love you too
I feel the same about you. Thank you
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wow that was very emotional and deep! I have a brother who went though that and he might be still going through it now! It was an awesome write keep it up!
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Man i loved this write! This write has alot of emotion behind it! I know where your coming from in it! Awesome job!
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Core of feelings and thoughts
That's a difficult place to go and even more difficult to describe. Basic questions we all ask ourselves. I've found that it is better to find those answers in the doing or through prayer and meditation. In aloneness we become separate.
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Very deep thoughts on life and what its offering to you and others. Just keep looking, and give time
its chance to heal. I love you.... Momma
Happy Mothers day dear daughter
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