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Gentle Thoughts





Softly, you tip-toe into my thoughts,
laying there a gentle dream,
for me to find when i wake.

Swirled with colours of all hues
tempered with sands of time,
casting glittering shades of shadowed hopes,

Wrapping around me, gently
the comforting elegance of
silken laced thoughts.

Quietly whispering
the gentle breeze to
warming hugs.

Sprinkling delicate
rain drop kisses
into my heart.

Shimmering softly-
guiding my path
along the treacherous terrain,

Placing yourself
in my heart
now and forever.

Where I will
hold you close.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Sun-shiney
    June 19

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    yes the gently thoughts that get us threw the day awaiting for the day they will become no longer thoughts at all. but a lover being held in the gentle arms of their love.

  • nilav
    June 9
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    these gentle thoughts lead us on our way throughout...well expressed ...lovely poem


  • stavykm gold member
    May 28

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    Beautiful

    I loved this poem. This is just beautiful and softly sensual. Brought a smile to my face of the tenderness that loves spell can have over us.

    Sprinkling delicate
    rain drop kisses
    into my heart.

    Loved this stanza!! You are wonderful and I just love you!!
    Your Friend &
    Sister
    Kelle Marie


  • penman gold member
    May 28
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    Excellent

    Wonderful creation. So fill with thoughts worthy of the title. Thank you for sharing.
  • Beautiful...

    Sis... This was truly a beautiful write, this one is close to my heart... I feel every word...

    Love you always
    Lots of 's for you...

  • Lovely write here

    So sweet this is and yes the embrace so felt forever more

  • awwwwww.....your poem has so much meaning...i LOVE it! jeje

  • Amera gold member
    May 10

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    As always, your love poems melt my heart. This is wonderful. It should be in a contest.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • penman gold member
    May 8
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    Excellent

    Wow, such great choice of words and so well done. Thank you for sharing.

  • Such a beautiful piece. Very good job. I love all of the descriptions, especially rain drop kisses.

  • Candy6
    May 8
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    Very beautiful good writing
  • All I can say is BEAUTIFUL!!!! Love it!

    • Thanks Hon. Took some work to keep it soft all the way through.... but.... well worth it in the end.
  • a very beautiful poem of love and tenderness.

    Quietly whispering
    the gentle breeze to
    warming hugs.

    Sprinkling delicate
    rain drop kisses
    into my heart.

    you have been blessed.

    . Rewarded 4


  • Desire gold member
    May 8

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    Aaaaaaaaaaaw~~

    Now this is a Beauty and Love the peaceful feel You have brought through in Your words!!
    Swells the eyes!!

    Shimmering softly-
    guiding my path
    along the treacherous terrain,
    These lines grab~~

    Love that border too
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

  • Mommy, did you have your inspirational tea today? I thought so You used more imagery in this one than you normally do...I like it I like it a lot You know what? I love it Only the best comes from my mom's heart
    Love, Little One

  • awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww hugs.... i really like this.. you are sooooooo wonderful.... *tears roll down face* love ya... hugs hugs hugs..... and more hugs....
    • *wipes the tears* Thanks hon....
      This one was not easy, trying to keep it soft and gentle all the way through....
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