Cadenced drops of water,
cleanse constraints.
Scrupulousness detoxing impurities,
calmness purifying a soul
of indiscretions.
Numbing disdain, temporarily assembling
a realm of tranquility.
Beauty inhaled in deeply,
through serenity's purification.
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30 words
picture : prompt picture by keida5566
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Beauty inhaled in deeply,
through serenity's purification.
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Beautiful
Amazing take on this prompt. You did a fantastic job. Best of luck in this contest
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My favorite part is the whole thing, I was going to quote this line and then that and then realized I would have to copy and paste the whole thing. Great write!
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MysticalRayne
Awesome write Sissy Good luck
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