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Upward Arms

Beating drum,that's my roof,
I know it's time now,
A small smile, curling lips
water in my eyes,
spiraling downward to my toes
shimmering on my ivory teeth
opening my arms
and clinging to you,
A rain-induced embrace

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  • tara wilson gold member
    May 21, 2008

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    "A rain-induced embrace"

    Beautiful - there is nothing better than a rain induced embrace..thank you so much for entering my contest..