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Race For The Morning

Now we climb the gun
Pull the hammer back
Let the trigger slide
Bullet goes into the ear
Out the other side
It can die
No doubt
Don't pout
Complicated entity
Serenity
Security
I am blind
Might I resign
There's a sign
Stuck in a hairpin bind
Don't be so kind
Live the lie
America's pie
Eating meats on the rye
No time to buy
No cash to spend
This is the end
Never end
Never and ever forever
Pull the lever

And watch the pendulum
Loom as time stands still...

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  • Deathless1
    May 9, 2008

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    this is dark and i think about you reading it in a mean viose. i like it though, not in a dirty way.lol

    but yes, it is quite nice indeed.
    clari


  • vampire of thought
    May 8, 2008

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    wow, that was cool.......

    It had a foreboding aspect and an....oh, I can't seem to place the right word for it...

    abstract and interesting.