At home
A happy paper prison
Four walls
Keeping me in
Keeping them out
Protecting me
From the eyes
From the smells
The stupid people
Who say
This is who I am.
People ask me
Tell me I can go
Why would I want to?
Why would I leave?
Outside that door
I can't even breathe.
The air so thick
With people
Who tell me
I can't.
I can't stay inside
I can't think this way
I can't let them see me
What would they say?
Why do I care?
I can't close my ears
And thats why I'm scared.
If I leave
All those words
Will be there.
Author notes
I'm not sure if this is fitting, but it was interesting to write.
A contest entry
- Agoraphobia by Origami Shapes.
600 points, ended May 9, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
hey, no fear, say what you like.
Comments
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i like it. i espicially like the lines i can't close my ears / and that's why i'm scared
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thank you
Yeah, its always to strange when I actually manage to say what i was thinking haha, thats my favorite part too
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