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If I leave

At home
A happy paper prison
Four walls
Keeping me in
Keeping them out
Protecting me
From the eyes
From the smells
The stupid people
Who say
This is who I am.

People ask me
Tell me I can go
Why would I want to?
Why would I leave?
Outside that door
I can't even breathe.
The air so thick
With people
Who tell me
I can't.

I can't stay inside
I can't think this way
I can't let them see me
What would they say?
Why do I care?
I can't close my ears
And thats why I'm scared.
If I leave
All those words
Will be there.

Author notes

I'm not sure if this is fitting, but it was interesting to write.

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Comments

  • startotheright
    May 9, 2008
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    i like it. i espicially like the lines i can't close my ears / and that's why i'm scared


    • daisygirlk
      May 9, 2008
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      thank you

      Yeah, its always to strange when I actually manage to say what i was thinking haha, thats my favorite part too