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Rage

rage pulsates
through my veins
fueling my anger
impowering me
a heat washes
over my body
my vision becomes
blood red
waves of dizziness
overwhelm me
words of
fury flood
my mind
clouding
my thoughts
impulse kicks in
fingers curl
arm reels back
then surges
foward
impact of
flesh on flesh
causes me
no pain

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  • Velkyra
    July 6
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    I really like this poem..its raw and angry. WoOt


  • A-Daisy-Among-Roses
    November 24, 2008

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    this is.....fabulous. I love the flow or well the choppyness of the lines, it adds to the tension of what your saying.