Oh dotty little circles on my sheet,
you make my life feel so complete,
with your circularness and free on angles,
at least you don't have to dangle.
I feel so happy when I'm around you,
ill wash, and clean you till your good as new,
I love you and i want you all the time,
but you are silent and act like a mime.
I love you and need you when im sick,
ill never use you like a toothpick.
I love my polk-a-dots
and i hope you like tater-tots
Do you like this poem!!!!!!
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Such forced rhyme. D:
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Exuse Me!!!
Such forced ryme if you have nothing nice to say then don't say it at all because I don't want to hear it -
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Well, if you'd like me to leave a more in-depth critique, let me know.
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ummm
who are you and who is this
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hmmm sounds familiar did u COPY THIS OFF SOMEONE!?!?!?!?
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this is really cute lindsay... lol. u i think you can make some more poems that are really good. luvsss.....
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i know
I know that it is weird but I think that it is cool I don't usually write those kind of poems and stuff so leland helped me a little bit of writing this...
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lol
that is funny
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