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Slapped

Slapped

By: Julia L. Clark

 

To the forming of his flesh,

To the pounding of nature rain.

 

To the structure of oeuvre

Back muscles.

 

To the soul in his feet,

From the definition he imprints

To the breath of his in scents.

 

To the structure of his cheek bones

That forms the mile of smiles.

 

From the moment I almost died

To give him his first and second son.

 

Every time I thought,

I was to tired and over done.

 

From the millions of times I threw you out

Of my heart, to make you grow up

To see I am a shooting dart.

 

From the time you abused me,

And from the times I continue

To abuse you,

 

The day I tore up the marriage papers

And said,

By Jehovah will, take my fiancés because

I am through with you.

 

From the moment you told me you

Will fight to prove I am your match,

From the joy I feel to soon be renewing

My vowels, from a woman point of

View true love will always

Open its hand and across your face

Give you a re flash of you must stay

Union and in return give envy, and

Jealous a spit right back of a firm slap.

 

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserv

 

Author notes

Slapped

Marriages, Faith, Zeus, Strength, Compassion, Loyalty,
Love. Funny I was able to pen this but once you travel
What sweat, blood and anger, rage, pissed and tears of
Being the Woman govenor of your house hold. Its Priceless and it takes you to suit up and if you have
To put all you stand for in a boxing ring lol And make
It a match your definition of looking in to ones Children and so forth making your time worth fiking a
Lot of return income tax refund for a whole lot more.

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  • dannyjay
    June 3, 2008
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    very nice. i really enjoyed the read thanks

  • carole21
    May 20, 2008

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    good write for the prompt . . liked "To the forming of his flesh" and "true love will always Open its hand and across your face" . . congrats on the trophy . .


  • moluv10
    May 9, 2008

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    I love to see your sweet side. It really shines in this wonderful write. Congrats on the gold. Keep up the great work.


  • kennethlaney
    May 8, 2008

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    Very Good

    This was really good but It can't all be seen, You have some white words on the white background. Keep up the good work.


  • HoneyFire
    May 8, 2008
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    wow! so deep and realistic
    You are a very talented woman


  • D Saul So Sexy
    May 8, 2008

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    wow this was nice to i think you did a great job this to me explain the obstacles and the back bone of what you call a womans govenor nice wifey not saying that because i like you either good luck in the contest


  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 8, 2008
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    A very tender

    and sweet message. You are getting soft homegirl! l.o.l.j.k. I like this side of you!

    • i am just learning from my highly respected professor Swangrnv you know he is absolutely the best

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