The quietude of black and diamond skies,
Soft, soughing breezes whisper subtle sighs.
In such serenity, the spirit tries
To conscience each Life's act and harm dispose.
A chapel bathed in Chatre's leaded tints
Dispells all wicked wishes and imprints
On mind and heart a purity that hints
A choice of path, its goal a sweet repose.
With this pure Trinity, the Path that's trod
Will gift, at Ending Time, a Peace with God.
Author notes
My prompt is peace.
Sonnetina Tre is a ten line poem consisting of two quatrains and a couplet. The preferred metrical line is the iambic pentameter, with no mandated rhyme scheme. I have chosen the quatrain, quatrain, couplet form with a rhyme scheme of aaa, b, ccc, b, dd.
A contest entry
- Calling On The Big Dogs Of AP 2008 by blondone.
1375 points, ended May 27, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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There is no better peace than know that our path will lead us to eternal peace with our God. This is a beautiful sonnetina. The imagery and alliteration is excellently penned.
I think I will read some more of your poetry dear teacher friend of mine!
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Thank you for you kind words. I believe this was one of the last times I was on site. I took a serious fall, broke three vetebrae and ended in a wheelchair. So to read such a lovely comment was a surprising welcome. Thank you again. Mamad
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A lovely write the words read with such ease and grand imagery strong and powerful message enclosed I would love to dispose of all harm striking line thank you for entering
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Your prompt will be: Peace
Take this where you wish
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