Finding what cannot be found
Searching this land abound
To find and kiss so he can be free
From his sin stained form and back to me
A curse so rare and so untrue
To watch as they take you
A love so real even in eternity
To find the place for this key
To watch my love killed because of what he is
Or how he looks, that's such a sin...
Author notes
options! contest entry...wish me luck Option #5
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- Royo Time by Riftkin.
525 points, ended May 14, 2008, 5 entries
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Comments
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very good, and a lovely take on the fanciful picture prompt
to base solely on appearance, is, as you say "such a sin"
a cute rhyming poem.
well done.
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This is a nice take on the prompt. Thank you for taking the time to enter. Riftkin
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Wow! you took a whole new concept of the frog being your love one. I love to have read even more. You have a excellent imagery also.....Thanks for sharing your talent...
novy
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Good write here
When a world is taught through time to repeat old hates amongst the races its a battle forever to be .To teach and learn we are one and all together we shall make freedom reign then and only then will the destruction of the human race end .
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ITS A GREAT POEM. well writen and choice of words. I love the lines: To find and kiss so he can be free
From his sin stained form and back to me. Good luck in the contest.
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A great poem filled with emotion. Great flow and well written as well...great job
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