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Alone

          Alone
Sitting In The Corner,
      No one had noticed she's been crying.
    She sulks In the dark, waiting for a reply.
        Alone she waits, staring at the sky.
A flower of remembrence
              Stains her memory
      With pink dots, and white embroidery
  An appaling remark, she finds
    Again and again, she is alone in the dark.

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  • Pinktoxicsugar
    May 12, 2008
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    Cool

    It is really awsome I like this one a lot


  • Chanson belle
    May 10, 2008
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    awwww so sad hugggg


  • brooklynngirl
    May 9, 2008

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    Wow

    I wonder what this girl has been thru...
    awesome poem, the choice of words was very nicely done.
    -b


  • named.disaster--x
    May 8, 2008

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    Anna...

    This is an amazing poem! lol I love it because I feel like that sometimes... ya know? well I would have to say these are my favorite lines

    "A flower of remembrence
    Stains her memory
    With pink dots, and white embroidery
    An appaling remark, she finds
    Again and again, she is alone in the dark."

    I think those lines are so amazing!Absoulutly astounding!well I love you hun and the best of luck to you!

    I LOVE YOU!!

    Page


  • love them d k c
    May 8, 2008
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    i love the poem

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    May 8, 2008
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    This is sad

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