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A Big O Bass

Throwing this lure.. then reeling it in..
Over.. then over.. then over again..
Feeling.. this strike..
Pulling my rod.. just right..
Fish is fighting.. swimming for life..
Line is tight.. reeling bass in..
Out of the water.. there it is..
A big O bass.. my fishing friends..

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  • secberm
    July 13, 2008

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    As I tell everyone, write from the heart. If it's from there, then no one can tell you if it's a good or bad poem. The only one that matters is you. Write on. One.

    Dez


  • Ryno
    June 26, 2008

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    _No_ Creativity / Originality
    _Yes_ Imagery
    _No_ Metaphor
    _No_ Emotion
    _No_ Reaction
    _No_ Relatability
    _Yes_ Fluency
    _No_ Powerful Beginning
    _No_ Powerful Middle
    _No_ Powerful Ending
    _Yes_ Connecting Ideas
    _No_ Interesting Idea Behind Piece and/or a Message Behind Piece
    _No_ Interesting In General (Does Not Bore)