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The Skies of Eyes (( LIVE VIDEO))

 

 

 

 

The Skies of Eyes

By: Julia L. Clark

 

 

The fluttering of eye lashes,

The salt of tears.

The story of joy,

The depression of stress smears.

 

The story of eyes,

Tender,

Soothing, like falling rain.

The chapters of a turning page.

The perfect words chosen,

Like cotton strings perfectly woven.

 

The skies of eyes,

When I take a deep breath and sigh.

Why the eyeliner of beauty

Displays the finishing touches

Of the birth of watching society angels.

 

The story of eyes,

Envy,

Jealous,

Resentment,

Theft of identity.

 

Remember me,

The flesh of sounds.

The lust of a accident.

The ambition of strength.

One who thought you could

Do no wrong.

 

The skies of eyes,

Will look at you directly,

And see your soul.

And will bitterly deceive you,

And selfishly tell you.

The crucifixion either of truth

Are the impales of the skies

Of eyes.

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

 

 

 

 

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  • Nothing But No
    May 29, 2008

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    Beautiful, one thing though on a grammatical level:
    " The lust of a accident. " should be " The lust of an accident." not meaning to be hyper-critical it's lovely either way Best of luck in the contest


  • Queen of Cups
    May 28, 2008
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    loved it

    I am sorry I did not get to hear this .Love the presentation .


  • reeseXtheXsoldier
    May 23, 2008

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    niceness

    thanks for comment on "Climbing" I love that one

    this is rockin!
    "The story of eyes" --very good line


  • Ithica silver member
    May 21, 2008

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    You are a fresh voice and a rainbow in a black and white world... Congrats. of the Silver trophy... Must book-mark to listen to audio version...


  • kissingsolitude
    May 15, 2008

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    i love this piece, your voice makes its come alive. i just can't stop listening to it, its so good. you are such a talented writer, every piece i've heard of yours is ingrained with such truth. awesome write.

  • Liveloveperforming
    May 13, 2008

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    A breathtaking piece

    Wow! For once I’m actually speechless…
    Well Done. I’m adding you as favourite and would love to read more of your work.


  • darlintlc silver member
    May 10, 2008

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    Finally got to listen to your poem "The Skies of Eye's"
    You got it going on here...beautifully spoken words,you did justice to my pic.

    Thanks for taking the time to enter!
    Looking forward to more of your work!
    darlintlc


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    May 10, 2008

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    This was great! I love the fact I get not only to read wonderful poetry but now I get to hear and see all the subtle nuances that you the writer has in your head when writing this. Its a two for the price of one, with cream of the crop goods. Loved the rhythm with that smoky jazz feel well done
    cyberartist


  • Heath Thompson
    May 9, 2008

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    Hey Julia,

    Was attracted to your work because I wanted to look at a poem with video (considering doing my own) and I wondered at first if your poem seemed better because I could hear your voice reading it to me but no, your words are great.

    There is clearly so much thought gone in to who you have selected your words. This stanza here:

    Remember me,

    The flesh of sounds.

    The lust of a accident.

    The ambition of strength.

    One who thought you could

    Do no wrong.



    Is brilliant - I really like this. Well done.

    • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
      May 9, 2008
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      thank you i am so glad this was liked i love it as well i shall come pay you a visit like in a few minutes thank you


  • Ephiphany
    May 8, 2008

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    In truth

    again, you have penned such.
    Yes, the eyes foretell many stories of all times. If only you could hear the soul of the eyes. Love this, I with you all the best in the contest.

    theLdy


  • D Saul So Sexy
    May 8, 2008

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    bravo mommy bravo i loved it you did a great job let me come blow those candles out girl i am not playing nie good luck to you in the contest


  • darlintlc silver member
    May 8, 2008
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    I'm sorry I don't get it. Is this your poem?

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