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The moment time stood still;

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'I did not read the rules'.

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  • Nephlim
    June 14, 2008

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    Wow, this is exactly what I wanted when I said a moment! The emotions clear and the moment clear! Very beautiful entry you have here.

    But I must say... go read the rules missy
    Good luck!


    • z etoile
      June 14, 2008
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      I read your rules hun reread it
      I entered real quick just for you

  • hose30
    May 9, 2008

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    Wow soulful with great cliffhanger effect. I was touch by your words and the deepness of them . You are truly great in conveying your words.Great job Sis.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 8, 2008

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    hhmm

    You never told me you could write 'cliffhangers! j.k.
    Man, it sure feels like a letdown, after all that time
    and they just resisted each other? wow, you need to do a sequel!

  • mcheadle
    May 8, 2008
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    Now this is

    temptation and not touching. Better at this art than I could do- not touch not talk WOW...mac

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