All is silent,
But not quite,
I'm all alone,
In the night.
I flinch,
As I'm hit by pain,
As I remember,
Darkness's reign.
I start to cry,
No one cares,
The pain's unbearable,
Salty drops drench my hair.
I cry in terror,
On the street,
My mind blacks out,
I clutch my feet.
My blood's around me,
It seems the darkness has made its mark,
If anyone cared to listen they'd hear,
My last whisper in the dark.
A contest entry
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If only the whispers in the dark didn't sound like the hiss of serpents.
It makes the darks embrace feel like a coiled constriction.
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creepy and dark
a great poem overall -
Thank you fore entering my contest. This was a really nice poem.. I love the mystery of what exactly is hapening. Great write and good luck
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Nice job! I love it, it is dark tho. But i do no u and ya u r kinda dark!
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Great write. Eerie lines brings across the imagery well. Nice construction and flow. Kept my attention and allowed for individual perspective. Enjoyed it greatly. Thanks for the read.
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Awesome
AWesome man!!!thats hell good!!!!!!!! -
Welcome to AllPoetry!
Very intensely deep and full of emotion.
For what it's worth, I care and I'll listen. Just promise it won't be the last whisper.
There are many wonderful people here on AP with similar feelings that need to find one another to get through the tough spots. My ears are always available.
Keep expressing through writing.
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