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Take a Trip Into Imaginationland

Sunshine Princess lives by a forest.
One day while walking in her forest,
she meets a beautiful white unicorn
eating some grass for a snack.

He didn't have an apples you see
and had to eat horrid grass.
Sunshine Princess remembered
she had an apple in her pocket.

The unicorn ate it hungrily.
He neighed in thanks.
Then he lowered himself
so she can hop on.

Off they went at a trot
through the forest.
His hooves lightly
touching the ground.

Next he sprouted
beautiful silver wings
and took off into
the light blue sky.

Up, up over the rainbow,
waving to leprechuans.
Higher and higher until
they reached the land of the fairies.

The fairies greeted their visitors warmly.
A great feast was held in their honor
with dancing, games and Fairy Dust.
They partied well into the wee dawn hours.

When Princess Genna awoke,
she was safely in her bed.
Had it all been a dream?
From close by, a unicorn softly called.




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  • FloridaGatorQueen silver member
    June 24, 2008

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    This is an awesome poem. I love fairy tales!!! This sounded like a fun dream to have. I enjoyed the read! Thank you for entering my contest.


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    May 14, 2008

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    How Magical! Can I go there with you next time? Loved the ending; when she wakes up wondering if it was all a dream, and then the Unicorn neighs. Gave me chills. Who's to say what the reality is? Maybe that is the real thing, and we are but a dream from that realm.
    Thank you for the magic! It is so nice to read and to get away from the mundane reality of this existence, or non-existence, whatever the case may be. lol's

  • Liquid memories
    May 8, 2008

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    ahhhhhhh such a sweet soft write of feelings of fantasy land you have shared. perhaps it was not a dream, just fantasy of mind and hopes, to become reality. thank you for sharing. success in this contest.


  • grannyeri gold member
    May 8, 2008

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    Quite the tale you tell in these lines; good flow. Liked the ending too. Wishing you well in this contest.


  • Three Doves
    May 8, 2008

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    A wonderful adventure for a sweet princess. Jonateau at your service My Lady. Best wishes in life and the contest.
    Peace in light and love
    Noah

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    May 8, 2008

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    Awwww I love this it is great much love always

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