There was a young woman named Di
If she couldn't have chocolate she'd cry
Caffeine might do
Alcohol too
But really choc is all that she'd buy!
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Author notes
Not very good but the best I could come up with right now and it's true LOL
BG by me. snag it if you like, credit is nice but not neccesary.
A contest entry
- What is your vice? Fun! by Lucy..
700 points, ended May 9, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
be thoughtful, tactful and HONEST!
Comments
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Hahaha!
This is what I call a ditty! Funny too! Deliciously delightful!
What a great pen!
Jennifer
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Hahaha!
This is what I call a ditty! Funny too! Deliciously delightful!
What a great pen!
Jennifer
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hehe... cute lymrick!! I love chocolate too.. in fact I ate a block tonight
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Haha this was silly, thanks for the chuckle
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Wow!! This is cute, and it's like you literally wrote it about me, that's how well I relate Lovely. Sounds a bit like a limerick. One thing, you seem to have misspelled "too" in the forth line, was that intentional or just a typo?
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ha! I always get to and too mixed up
and you know what we have the same name I am Di aswell 
maybe thats why it sounds like you!! haha it is suposed to be a limerick but I don't know if it could classify or not - a silly write
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makes me want to have some chocolate LOL
this was cute and simple, just a joy to read ^_^
all the best in the contest! -
haha, this is funny! like the rhyme scheme, simple and to the point!
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Glad this gave you a laugh
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Hmm, true for me too! Thanks for your entry
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You got there quick! I have a background now
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lol. Thanks for letting me know, great background!! Mmm, might need to make a trip to the fridge now.
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hehe thanks!
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