misery,
an invisible enemy
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4 words only
In a list
A contest entry
- Another of those four words contests by agilejill.
300 points, ended May 12, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Your poem creeps up on me too
It is like all of a sudden, things seem to be getting worse. Another fitting is that the rate of crumbling isn't always perceived physically, and you can't often see it coming when hurt falls upon you. This is so personal for anyone's state like this, and also something no one else can totally picture... yes they are blind towards it near being accustomed. I love your comparison because it holds the imagery it needs.
Nice border too, as barely noticed as the poem is, thank you for entering,
~agilejill~
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