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Broken Promises (Heroic Couplet)

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There’s an accord, though we’re oft unaware,
between nature and man for each others care.
It’s from her nurture that we grow and thrive.
Her bountiful tribute keeps us alive.

For the past hundred years, we’ve turned our back
and pretended that we would never lack
the things that we needed. We didn’t learn.
We need to pay what we owe in return.

We accept what was once unthinkable
and now our water’s barely drinkable.
We continue to pollute once fresh air
and yet we think that nature doesn’t care.

You see everyday on news and TV
another of nature’s catastrophes.
A monsoon in Burma tears at the shores,
food riots among the African poor.

Glaciers melting at an alarming rate
while deserts expand. There can't be debate.
We watch it all in comfort on TV
insulated from the reality.

We can no longer keep heads in the sand.
We need to take action and make a stand
to help our earth as it’s always helped us.
No longer can we ignore our solemn trust.

If we go along waiting for others
it won’t be long before we discover
we have achieved one final distinction:
We’ll be the last species facing extinction.

 

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Perhaps on one bright far off future day
a small tender green shoot will push its way
with hope thru the long fallowed earth and then
a soft breeze will whisper “let’s try again.”

 

 

Author notes

Heroic Couplet- two lines of iambic pentameter, also the last two lines of the English sonnet.
Picture Credit: "Green Grass" (www.deviantart.com)

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  • blondone silver member
    May 20

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    A lovely poem the truth is we have broken many promies to our earth we call home yet shes leaves us with new hope all the time such as a new shoot appears every spring I found grand imagery is these words written done all in a beautiful form thank you for entering...


  • NeonRose silver member
    May 11
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    Love the way you've taken your prompt! Excellent write and use of the form.


  • MagicLady silver member
    May 9

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    So...you are a big dog of AP, huh? I agree! Hope you do well with this contest. Nice use of "GREEN". We all know these things and I believe that as humans, we are starting to become more aware of these things, AND doing something about it. This ties in well with your poem "Side Show".
    I know you like natural things, you did great with this, Ken.

    Cheryl

  • Sigh.. isn't this just so true! What we are doing to this earth... yet she has an amazing ability to renew herself.. if only we'd give her the chance. Poignant write

  • Awesome and strong and right to the point. Well done my friend.


  • blondone silver member
    May 8
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    Your prompt will be: Broken Promises

    take this where you wish have fun and good luck...
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