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Autumn's Glow

The leaves made soft, rustling sounds

As we walk through autumn’s glow.

The equinox beckons in bounds,

The harvest in its full flow.

Hay making as we made hay,

A summer’s love going strong.

A kiss leads to our path way,

To our world where we belong.

Lover’s fall is now our tune,

Before winter breaks with snow.

Tendrils of sun on the dune,

As we walk through autumn’s glow.

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  • KayJay
    May 9, 2008

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    I really enjoyed this side of you... the lover. Beautiful imagery and wonderful tenderness...
    Ken


    • Corvus Corone
      May 10, 2008
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      I love the autumn and its even more wonderful with someone to share with. Thank you Ken

  • The Poetic Angel
    May 8, 2008

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    so butiful Jems m'Lady

    this line is awsome...
    As we walk through autumn’s glow

    i love Autum and spring

    xxx Your angel xxx


    • Corvus Corone
      May 8, 2008
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      One of my favourite thing walking through autumnal leaves

      Thanks babes

      xxx Jem xxx